Escutcheon [approved]

Escutcheon (Real name: Scott Gabionza) - Lightspeaker
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9" (173cm)
Weight: 165lbs (75kg)
Blood Type: A+

Body 4 Mind 6 Soul 5
HP:45 - EP:55 - SV: 9
(5)CV - (5)ACV - (3)DCV

Defects:
(2) Marked -2x1 = -2 (White wings with mechanical parts, think: gears like Seraph's Clockwork Blade, but not as apparent)
(1) Not So Strong = -1x1 (As a doctor, finesse > brute strength)
(1) Recurring Nightmares = -1x1 (Was traumatized by the loss of his homeworld)

Attributes:
(2) Healing (due to Shard) 2x4 = 8
(1) Flight (due to Wings) 1x4 = 4

(2) Servant - "Spade, the Wheel of Righteousness" 2x2 = 4
Body 8x1 = 8
Mind 1x1 = 1
Soul 1x1 = 1
Skills
Unarmed Attack 3x4 = 12
Unarmed Defense 1x4 = 4
Melee Defense 1x4 = 4

(2) Magic 2x4 = 8
Weapon Attack (Arrow of the Magus) 3x4 = 12 (15 damage) - Homing (Autohit)
Massive Damage (Offensive Prayer) 1x2 = 2 (5 extra damage)
Force Field (Defensive Prayer) 1x3 = 3 (15 damage prevented)
Heightened Awareness (Insight Prayer) 2x1 = 2
Spirit Ward (Ward vs Evil) 1x1 = 1

Combat Skills:
(1) Melee Defense 1x4 = 4
(1) Ranged Defense 1x5 = 5
(1) Unarmed Defense 1x4 = 4

Noncombat Skills:
(1) Medical 1x4 = 4
(1) Poisons 1x1 = 1
(1) Biological Sciences 1x2 = 2

Inventory:
1pc of buckler
a couple of healing herbs
a set of alchemical vials

Clothes:
black wool coat, red waistcoat, black wool pants, white button down shirt, dark navy blue necktie, black leather gloves, black socks, leather shoes (retro look); additional: flight googles (is this ok?)

Background: (sorry if it's a bit long, took a few days of rewrites, first time writing something fanficlike too)
Scott was a doctor on one of the nameless realms. In this realm, it was in the middle of a world war. Countries vie for dominance constantly, as militarism was the only measure of superiority. Unfortunately, his country was losing. As a way to boost its dwindling reinforcement pool, it has finally resorted to conscripting doctors like him to the war effort. Scott wasn't a good soldier, early on earning the ire of his superiors. As a result of this, he was reassigned to the engineer corps as one of its medics. It was in here that he shined because he generally got the job done as long as it's first aid or medicine or any task not directly related to killing.

Scott was part of the team digging a new trench as part of the defensive fortifications of the advance guard. While digging, his shovel hit a particularly hard metal object. It was a metallic shard with a mark of some sort he didn't recognize. As he picked up the object, a mysterious glow emanated from the shard and suddenly, portals opened up everywhere. Demons flooded out of the portals and the soldiers were caught off guard.

Slaughter ensued. Guns blazed, artillery shells rained. Pandemonium was afoot and Scott saw many of his fellow soldiers killed, mostly ripped apart by claw and talon. As he was running away mainly from fear, a freak artillery shell exploded meters from him and he was hit by shrapnel. As he lay there bleeding, death was certainly near. Just then, the shard glowed with a white light. It enveloped him.

He woke up bruised and bandaged. A man with great hawkish wings was there beside him, waiting. He introduced himself as a Lightspeaker of the Alonai order. He explained that he was saved because of the timely intervention of the angels, as the portals that opened weren't all demonic. He also explained that the light that enveloped and saved Scott was a form of powerful, archaic protection magic. Because of this, even a relatively small shard was able to save him from near death.

Unfortunately, he also learned that his realm was torn apart, mostly because of the primal energies that radiated from the innumerable portals that besieged his world. The only evidence of his realm remaining was a barren island, floating in the plane called Purgatorio. Saddened by this - even though his world was mostly at war, it has still his home - he set forth and joined the Lightspeakers, for he had nowhere else to go.

Years later, Scott is now a lightspeaker himself. In his many excursions to the numerous planes, he has learned more about the enigmatic shard he possesses: It is apparently a shard of The Escutcheon of the Neutral, a powerful artifact that some sources claim comes from the time of The Twelve and was forged three way by the Neutral gods Hashaa, Goros and Marquai. It was said to be powerful enough to rival even the Iron Juggernauts of the demons. The shield bearer usually was also named Escutcheon as well - as there was a belief that even the mere possession of the name, could protect the bearer from harm. But in the height of the Nexal War, the shield was broken, and its shards were scattered across the countless realms - like his own.

Armed with this knowledge, he comes forth and saves those who need to be saved and perhaps find the remaining shards, if he can - aided by his pet Wheel, Spade, and his healing shard.

Greetings Escut and thanks for joining. CP and Skill wise everything is in accord. (insert applause here)

Ok, here are some thoughts. The marked defects means the you have a distinguishing mark to be able to identify you instantly when other people sees you even when you are only described to them (e.g. Marked lvl 1 - Battousai from samurai X having red hair and a cross scar on his cheek, Marked lvl 2 would be something like marvel's Hulk). True that having large white wings would easily identify you in a crowd in most genre, but in NW angels are common like demons. Note that Augustus have black wings and I suggested Zac's character to have a golden yellow hue to differentiate them from other winged angels. Its up to you if you wish to retain the marked defect and change the color or add additional descriptions to your wings. Also, you can check the NW aspects present as some have good ideas on how to "mark" your character.

Attack Restriction lvl 1 - You can't attack good characters. Sure its a great restriction, the question is how well your character can distinguish "good" characters. I'd be an interesting addition to how you roleplay your target not knowing who is really good or vile. Just want to point that out.

Arrows of the Magus - the homing ability is not auto-hit. The attack merely tries to hit another time when it misses. Just want to elaborate on it.

Summary: Everything is good, the only thing I think that I would like changed is your Marked defect. Post a reply if you changed anything so I can check again, else post a reply saying your all good so I can have the guys reward you with your CP bonus and Inventory. Please also add what your character is wearing and update you character sheet under profiles when its all done.

See you in the Nexus.

Updated. Please recheck, thanks.

Updated Statistics:
Body 4 Mind 6 Soul 5
HP:45 - EP:65 - SV: 9
(5)CV - (5)ACV - (3)DCV

Attributes:
(2) Healing (due to Shard) 2x4 = 8
(1) Flight (due to Wings) 1x4 = 4
(1) Energy Bonus 1x1 = 1 (+10 EP)

(3) Servant - "Spade, the Wheel of Righteousness" 3x2 = 4
Spade's Statistics:
BODY 7 MIND 4 SOUL 4
HP: 55 - EP: 40 - SV: 11
(5) CV - (5) ACV - (3) DCV
(3) Unarmed Attack 3x4
(1) Unarmed Defense 1x4
(1) Melee Defense 1x4

(1) Magic (Prayers) 1x4 = 4
Massive Damage (Offensive Prayer) 2x2 = 4 (10 extra damage)
Force Field (Defensive Prayer) 1x3 = 3 (15 damage prevented)
Heightened Awareness (Insight Prayer) 2x1 = 2
Spirit Ward (Ward vs Evil) 1x1 = 1

(1) Magic (Offensive Magic) 1x4 = 4 (2 magic points left)
Arrow of the Magus 2x4 = 8 (15 damage)
Homing

Combat Skills:
(1) Melee Defense 1x4 = 4
(1) Ranged Defense 1x5 = 5
(1) Unarmed Defense 1x4 = 4

Noncombat Skills:
(1) Medical 1x4 = 4
(1) Poisons 1x1 = 1
(1) Biological Sciences 1x2 = 2

Inventory:
1pc of buckler
a couple of healing herbs
a set of alchemical vials

Clothes:
black wool coat, red waistcoat, black wool pants, white button down shirt, dark navy blue necktie, black leather gloves, black socks, leather shoes, flight googles

Cumulative CP earned after initial conceptualization and first adventure: 2CP + 2CP = 4CP
CP spent: 3CP
CP banked: 1CP

Bought:
(1CP) Energy Bonus 1x1 (+10 EP)
(2CP) Servant "Spade, the Wheel of Righteousness" 1x2

You didn't write down your servant's HP, EP, CV, ACV & DCV in the list. Also please move your Arrow of the Magus on another magic Attribute slot since I'm allowing you to totally "Re-do" your character since your part of the test players involved in ironing out the RP thread and rules.

Updated.